“Howl”
by Allen Ginsberg depicts a society of rebellion during the 1950’s in the style
of the “beat generation.” The “Revolutionary Letters” by Diane DiPrima are
almost notes of how one goes about starting and partaking in a revolution. To
say that these letters could be a response to Ginsberg’s “Howl” would be
accurate because of the processes DiPrima provides are seen in “Howl.” The kind
of response which DiPrima requires is that for those who don’t have anything
they may use their voices and own self to obtain anything which they desire. In
Ginsberg’s poem, they do just that though we never get a clear picture what it
is they strive for.
In “Howl I” Ginsberg paints a visual
of the country how so many people who seem to be in a depressive state. In one
line “who ate fire in paint hotels or drank turpentine…with dreams, with drugs,
with walking nightmares, alcohol and cock and endless balls,” a vulgar
statement but, what Ginsberg shows is how the people are reacting to the world.
In the time of World War II and an era of capitalism made everyone edgy and
fearful, thus distrust would arise in the nation. Later Ginsberg writes what
appears to be people being arrested for protesting in a subway, “distributed
Supercommunist pamphlets,” and “shrieked with delight in policecars for committing
no crime.” These acts of rebellion could be what DiPrima tries to establish in
her poem “Revolutionary Letters,” in all these acts that Ginsberg tells not
once does it mention any murder or such. In “Revolutionary Letter #7” DiPrima
states that carrying a weapon like a gun or knife is not a good idea, as “all
swords are two-edged, can be used against you.” The letter inputs more information for those
trying to bring light to any injustice in a manner that won’t cost your life or
wellbeing.
As for the response DiPrima’s poems
are a manual for rebellion, but leaves a lasting thought in “Revolutionary
Letter #19.” The thought of getting what you ask for thus DiPrima states to ask
for everything. This is a bit vague but deep down makes a lot of sense, why
just stop at getting say a few rights, why not get complete equality. In
Ginsberg’s “Howl” there no dialogue and any sort of demanding requests are
metaphorically speaking. In some cases, Ginsberg calls them crazy in a sense, in
one line “who demanded sanity trials accusing the radio of hypnotism” which at
first glance is another way of saying crazy. However, during the 1950’s with
the war going on many people were paranoid that the government and such were
trying to get complete control of the nation. This could be a way for the rebels
to ask, like DiPrima advocates, for all the answers from the government.
The two poems play off each other,
in that the “Revolutionary Letters” take what was happening during the riots of
“Howl” and put into an instruction guide. The ideas of both are similar,
DiPrima just goes the extra mile in refining the idea of revolution and inserts
more grounds and precautions.
I thought your introduction was great. You did a good job of briefly summarizing each text and presenting your argument. The beginning of the second paragraph was also well done, for you presented a claim, backed it up with a quote, and provided an explanation of that quote. However, the ending of this paragraph was a little confusing for me. I didn’t completely connect Ginsberg’s quote with DiPrima’s mention of the gun and knife. You mentioned connecting that these two are both acts of rebellion, but the line about Ginsberg not mentioning murder threw me for a loop. I was not quite sure what you were trying to accomplish with that statement. Regarding your conclusion, it was well-written, concisely summarizing your argument.
ReplyDeleteThe first two paragraph are both somehow background introduction. The second paragraph showed that Ginsberg and DiPrima talked about simmiar issues. Such introduction is very detailed and thourough, but on the other hand, you didn't argue enough for your thesis.In general, you quoted a litter bit too much of Ginsberg, but few of DiPrima. It would be better if you could specify some issues mentioned in both poems and argue how DiPrima answer Gingsberg.
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