Diane di Prima’s Revolutionary Letters have
correlations to Allen Ginsberg’s Howl, in that the themes of anarchy and
Revolution are consistent throughout both pieces. The authors perceptions of these
topics and the way they convey their ideas are distinct from one another, yet
they’re both trying to insinuate and instigate similar responses from their
readers. Di Prima’s articles utilize satire to create a list of completely
ridiculous tasks to initiate a Revolution, while Ginsberg utilizes outlandish/controversial
statements to agitate his readers into action.
Di Prima’s Revolutionary Letters, are a narrative on
the role that government, culture, and society play on the shaping of our
lives. She writes that we shouldn’t conform to the “norms” which they place on
us and gives her alternative interpretation of how we should deal with these cultural,
societal, and political norms. Concepts form her first Revolutionary Letter include
defeating a “force (or government)” which is greater than us. She also
basically writes that these systems of government or society determine the
worth of an individual based upon what society evaluates them to be. Her Seventh
Revolutionary Letter includes a list of ways in which she would recommend starting
a revolution. “success will depend mostly on your own state of mind: meditate,
pray, make love, be prepared at any time, to die” She’s saying that successful revolutions
rise out of calmness, piousness, pleasure, and a knowledge of the life cycle. She
is using satire to convey that no matter what one does, there will always be
death in the background and that we should live life to the fullest as we never
know when it will end. Her ninth revolutionary letter is comprised of an
outlandish list of tasks which she “believes” will instigate a revolution. Revolutionary
letter 19 is about conforming to cultural or societal norms and how we shouldn’t
bend ourselves the slightest bit to fit into society. I believed that in these
types of statements Di prima is trying to get a rise out of her readers with
her unyielding words.
This
kind of uncomfortable wording, which is meant to instigate a conversation about
these concepts in the reader’s mind is also utilized throughout Ginsberg’s poem.
Ginsberg’s Howl is a piece which
uses disturbing yet intriguing wording to convey his thoughts on rebellion and
activism. His poem’s wording allows his readers to grasp complex and even
absurd imagery. This allusion to imagery is the tip of the iceberg of this
piece as it utilizes collage like elements of ideas, people, and places to convey
an eminent pessimism in the world. His descriptions of these places are never
easy to swallow and often leave a bad taste in the reader’s mouth. By showing
the worst and most uncomfortable parts of society he’s initiating a
conversation with his readers about the scum of society and the darkness which
lies in all of it’s corners. He often references a who, which I interpret to be
society throughout his piece “who went out whoring through Colorado in myriad
stolen night cars, N.C., secret hero of these poems, cocksman, and Adonis of
Denver-joy to the memory of his innumerable lays of girls in empty lots and
diner backyards…” readers would likely
feel that society has lost any sense of sanity while morality would be the last
thing on anyone’s conscious as Ginsberg’s writing leaves the reader questioning
all common thought. Many would likely believe the only way to fix these issues
would be to erase them and start from scratch.
The last line of Ginsberg’s poem
goes “in my dreams you walk dripping from a sea-journey on the highway across
America in tears to the door of my cottage in the Western night” I believe that
Ginsberg is trying to convey that societal norms and government in America will
inevitably ruin anyone who tries to take a stand. In Di prima’s Revolutionary Letter
she writes “be prepared at any time, to die” Which I interpreted as life is
filled with uncertainty and one can never depend on the world to be
predictable. Therefore, although the Revolutionary Letters and Howl hold
similar resonances in thought. The overlaps don’t qualify Di prima’s work as a
response to Ginsberg’s outlook on revolution in Howl.
Although you do make some good points, most of this post is just summary of the poems rather than an in depth analysis of them. Your intro paragraph as well as the flow of your sentence structure could be much better as well. You do make good use of quotes in your argument though.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your analysis. I had a difficult time understanding Di Primma when I first read it but I now have a better understanding of it. I do think you should consider Andrew's critique but I overall believe you did great!
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