I don’t think Bartleby’s behavior was
a reasonable response for his circumstances. I think although he could have
been effected from his previous job as a “subordinate clerk in the Dead Letter
Office at Washington,” I don’t believe it should have caused him to act like
that towards people that wanted to help him like the narrator did. You can make
the argument that Bartleby was too far damaged and he was going to be that way
for the rest of his life but to me I don’t think it had to be.
Bartleby seemed
defeated with what life threw at him. All we know about him is what we find out
in the end, that he was someone who sorted letters that never arrived at their
destination. Other than that, there is no backstory to Bartleby or why he’s so
strange. We just know what he keeps saying, “I would prefer not to” and we just
see him as stubborn and rebellious. Throughout the whole first 26 pages we
don’t know anything else but his behavior and what the narrator says about him.
When we finally find out about his former job, we are kind of steered to feel
bad and justify his behavior. The narrator compares the “dead letters” that
Bartleby had to deal with in his previous job to “dead men” and claims that
that is why Bartleby is the way he is, “Conceive a man by nature and misfortune
prone to a pallid hopelessness, can any business seem more fitted to heighten
it than that of continually handling these dead letters, and assorting them for
the flames?” The narrator is implying that the emptiness that Bartleby exhibits
reflects the unrealized potential of the “dead letters” that were sent with
love, hope, and all other emotions that could come with letters. It seemed that
after that job, he lost hope and just waited to die, “On errands of life, these
letters speed to death.” The letters job affected him so deeply, that he was
never the same. Or we could argue that’s just how he has always been. Since we
don’t really know anything but what we learned at the end, we can only assume
that that is why he was the way he was.
If I were to use a theory to better
understand Bartleby, I think I would use the reader-response theory. Although,
with that theory, we would have to make a lot of assumptions from what we know
about Bartleby and the behaviors he shows us. So with the reader response
theory we fill in the gaps from his behavior and we assume he has lost his
purpose and he isn’t easy to pull out of this depression that he’s in.
I don’t
believe Bartleby’s actions and behavior was a very reasonable response to his
circumstances. From what I understand, Bartleby was defeated from his previous
job and clings onto the narrator for hope. “I had never before experienced
aught but a not-unpleasing sadness. The bond of a common humanity now drew me
irresistibly to gloom. A fraternal melancholy.” Even the narrator feels a
connection but there was only so much he could do to help Bartleby. If Bartleby
would have held on to that connection and moved on from his circumstances he
could have changed his end. He was unreasonable to treat the narrator, who
seemed to be intrigued and interested in helping him, with such, I guess you
can say, disrespect.
You did a good job in trying to understand Bartleby. Indeed,it is hard for readers to analysis Bartleby's throughts in such a novel that provided few backgrounds of him. I understand your struggle in this process, but you didn't really give the reason why you think Bartleby is not reasonable until the last paragraph. In addition, I am not sure if you agree with the narrator that the letter job turned Bartleby into such an "empty" person. Note that if you agree with the narrator, then the letter job is the reason of Bartleby's behavior.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your placement of quotes and your brief, to-the-point analysis of them. However, I felt the flow of your argument was a little confusing. In the first paragraph you set up your position to be that Bartleby’s behavior was not a reasonable response because it was not an appropriate one for those trying to help him. Therefore, I assumed your second paragraph would in some way reflect this point. For example, discuss points in the story where a character was trying to help him, but instead of Bartleby accepting it and trying to work it out, he responded in a closed off manner. Yet your second paragraph touched more on how we don’t know much about his past. The third paragraph also breaks away from your point to include a theory, until it arrives back at your argument in the fourth paragraph. Overall, I felt your ideas were strong, but needed more work on providing support.
ReplyDeleteGreat work on applying the reader-response theory to the story. As you point out, there was not much information about Bartleby. So we the readers have to fill in all those gaps as reader-response theory stated. Your interpretation on Bartleby’s psychical behavior is in deep and clear. But I didn’t see too much connection between psychical and physical behaviors. You spend a whole paragraph to explain his psychical behaviors and it is well written. However, those interpretation could use against your opinion.
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