Bartleby’s behavior
is not a reasonable response to his circumstances. In defining and analyzing how
his behavior and circumstances change in this story, we see why this is true.
When initially hired by the narrator, he was a focused worker, for he “did an
extraordinary quantity of writing…he seemed to gorge himself on my documents”
(6). However, for some reason, he stops working and starts a passive rebellion
of sorts. For instance, when asked to do a task, the narrator observes, “Bartleby
was never on any account to be dispatched on the most trivial errand of any
sort; and… [if asked] it was generally understood that he would prefer not to…”
(11). Then shortly after, he refuses to do any writing at all, and when
questioned as to why, has no response. The narrator’s then left to move
offices, while Bartleby stays behind. Yet, when he becomes a nuisance to the
new employers, he is taken to the Tombs prison, where he later passes away.
Considering ‘reasonable’ to refer to
something of logic and sound judgment, Bartleby’s response to his circumstance
does not fall under this category. Though the narrator’s account could be bias,
it is the only perspective of the story available, and so, we must assume it is
reliable. As a result, according to his recollection of events, he was patient and
respectful in his requests to Bartleby to not only do work, but also to leave
his office. For example, in his first attempt to fire Bartleby, the narrator
shows compassion to him through his willingness to help pay for Bartleby to
return home, as well as to assist in anything else Bartleby may need in the
future (14). Similarly, in a following attempt, the
narrator offers to pay him an extra twenty dollars to help him find a place and
move forward (17). The fact that Bartleby is shown such respect and care, yet
continues to refuse to comply to a simple request shows his irrational response
given the circumstance.
After Bartleby dies, we learn that he
experienced a potentially scarring situation when “he had been suddenly removed
by a change in administration” while working for the Dead Letter Office (27). This
could serve as an explanation for why Bartleby “prefers not to” do many tasks
requested of him. Also, his work with sorting dead letters for their inevitable
destruction could provide a reason behind his possible emotional injuries. Nevertheless,
if he was upset by his situation, doing nothing about it does not solve the
problem. Instead, a more sensible reaction could have been to utilize his boss’s
willingness to understand Bartleby’s point of view. The narrator asked “Why do
you refuse?” (8), and Bartleby could have explained his thinking and
potentially negotiated something more favorable.
Another alternative solution, is
that if Bartleby was upset by the employment system, he could have rallied other
workers who related to his problem and started a movement for change. While the
idea may seem idealistic, the narrator himself explained how Bartleby’s
influence was affecting people regarding their usage of the word ‘prefer’ when
he says, “…[Bartleby] has in some degree turned the tongues, if not the heads
of myself and clerks” (16). Bartleby had not intended to influence them, but he
did, suggesting that if he had actually tried to gain support for a problem he recognized,
there was potential for success to rally for reform. As a result, we see
through Bartleby’s situation and alternative responses, that his actual
response was not reasonable.
Although your post was on why Bartleby's behavior was not a reasonable response to his circumstances, I liked that you offered a possible explanation for his unreasonable behavior. However, I think you could have elaborated more on why Bartleby's removal from the Dead letter office would cause him to always say "I would prefer not to" when asked to do a task. I thought it was good that you provided alternate solutions that Bartleby could have used to change his situation. You provide a compelling argument that Bartleby had many opportunities to change his circumstances, but just chose to do nothing, which is why his behavior is unreasonable.
ReplyDeleteThe ideas in your essay are very clear and well fabricated. The fact you incorporated alternative responses of how Bartleby could have reacted, strengthen the point that you tried to make. The first paragraph, however, is a little vague with the events that occurred through out the story. Instead of merely stating what happened more information could have given better insight.
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